Your SOP intro matters more than you think
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4/29/20261 min read


Admissions committees read hundreds of SOPs, and if your opening doesn't spark interest immediately, the rest of your story won't land the way it should.
"Since childhood, I have always been fascinated by ..." or "I am extremely excited to apply for this position...."
It sounds nice, but it doesn't say anything.
A strong SOP introduction does one thing. It tells the reader exactly why you're here and where you're going.
Start with purpose; clarity; and intention
Your intro should answer three questions quickly:
What do you want to study?
Why does it matter to you?
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When you open with directional instead of drama, the reader immediately trusts your story and pays attention to the rest.
Part 2 coming next: How to introduce your story? intros you can copy.
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